Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but other people claim that it is the individual’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The schools and hospitals are two essential elements of every society and community. Due to the importance of these two institutions providing enough funds for them has always been important. there is an idea that governments should be responsible to provide budget for health service and education. In my view it is the best possible approach to have a productive system to keep a society healthy and educated.
there are several reasons why it is the best for health and educational services to be supported finantialy by governments and states. The major benefit of this policy is that there will be no need for insurrance companies. Over the past decades it has been proven that when insurrance companies get involved the price of services goes up and quality is dwindeling. Since any commercial firm is trying to make more money there should be no commercial aspect in health and education. this aproach has been implemented in the Britain and the outcomes are very intresting. The productivity has been increased and at the same time people paid less for a standard service, while in the USA where people have to deal with insurrance the rate of satisfaction from the social services are very low even though that they pay more.
Despite the benefits of aforementioned notion there are some negative points that should be considered. The most notable one is the lack of competition, which might decrease innovation and research. To solve this drawback a constant evaluation survey of teachers, nurses and doctors should be conducted.
In conclusion, free schools and universities besides free hospitals and health programs are pilars of a modern society and it is the dutiy of government to provide money and support to them. In my view this is the most effective way of providing this services to individuals of every country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, while, in conclusion, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11147540984 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83826125561 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547540983607 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3596842957 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.933333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140236876615 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418240336383 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383716159971 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757924198136 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234436479852 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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