Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents of very young children to stay at home to look after their children.
What do you think would be the advantages and disadvantages of this policy?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Spending time with family is quite essential for all the parents as it helps to maintain strong relationships among the members of the family. Some people are of the opinion that the government should pay one of the parents of the newborn. So that they can take care of them sitting back at home. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this policy.
To begin with, there are several advantages for both parents and children with this method. Firstly, children and the parent get a chance to spend ample time together understanding likes and dislikes. This help in building affections and love between them. Consequently, the family runs smoothly without any tensions and misunderstandings. Secondly, as the government is paying and it is no more a financial burden on the family to some extent as the complete response is not on the other parent. For example, one of my friends, Rahul used to work overtime as his wife left her job to look after their newborn baby. So, he was not able to spend enough time with family leading to disturbances among them. It is especially beneficial to this kind of families. As this has many advantages authorities should pay money to one of the parents of very young children.
On the other hand, there are several drawbacks as well. As the government is paying money, it is a burden to pay for all the million families especially in countries where young children are more in number. So, to generate revenue, the government will leverage high taxes on consumer goods which directly affects the common man. For instance, in developing countries like India, which is already in huge debts and implementing this will create more load on the government.
In conclusion, there are many advantages and disadvantages to the government paying one of the parents of very young children. It improves relationships among family members and reduces the financial burden on the other parent. So, it is beneficial to pay the money ensuring that it should not be a burden on the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1691.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90144927536 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76932821167 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486956521739 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1630222461 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.55 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307920667429 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971579181229 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985474114327 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197757583857 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569583411959 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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