some people think that the government should take care of disadvantaged people such as the unemployed and homeless people.do you agree or disagree?
The unemployment rate in many countries across the globe is on the rise. Similarly, the percentage of people with no roof over their head is also increasing. In this context, many people believe that it is the responsibility of the state to look after them so that they can maintain a minimum standard of living. I completely agree with this opinion.
It requires a huge amount of money for completion of education life. Students get financial support either from parents or borrow from the bank as student loan. It causes frustration when they do not find a job after course completion. They become a burden on the family and society as well. On top of this, they are worried about the debt which they have to pay back. There is a fair chance of involving this talent people in illegal activities in order to manage bread and butter. Government should come forward with long-term vision to solve this problem. For example, state can provide subsidized housing and monthly cash incentive for their living cost until they are employed. It is their basic right to enjoy recreational activities. Therefore, low-cost transit pass and free tickets for amusement will allow them to enjoy these rights. The best way the government can do is creating more job opportunity for the unemployed citizen.
Affordable housing is another major concern, particularly in all megacities. It is not an uncommon scenario that people are spending the night at the railway station and under the bridge. Their personal hygiene is badly compromised and they suffer from various physical illnesses due to extreme weather. They are mentally tormented too. The percentage of substance abuse is much higher among homeless people which pose threat to security. Building of more shelter home and drop in centre can solve this problem to a large extent. Government should allocate more funds for this purpose. Shared housing would be another option to mitigate this issue. It is seen that unemployment is linked to homelessness.
In conclusion, every citizen has right to enjoy a quality meaningful life. It is the responsibility of the state to provide that opportunity for all citizen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ovide that opportunity for all citizen.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, similarly, so, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05602240896 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71709838572 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591036414566 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0749562223 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.4230769231 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7307692308 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03846153846 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129888760182 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337174569017 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394089514767 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746976650412 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451269670189 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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