Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.To what extent do you agree with this view?
art is a heritage of the country. Investing money to encourage people in different art forms not only improves the cultural heritage of a nation but also improve the economy and places the nation on a global scale. although some people are of an opinion that spending on arts is not worthy, I personally believe that all sorts of art need to be encouraged for the betterment of the nation's economy.
To begin with, the government should encourage artists by proposing some welfare schemes for them, which will, in turn, boosts the economy of a country. For example, let us take the example of art galleries, where the artists showcase their creative masterpiece, which later becomes the pride of the gallery. As a result, people from different countries visit the art gallery, due to which the country's economy will be improved from tourism. Moreover, foreigners get to know about the cultural heritage that our country holds.
Additionally, artists, when they become famous, bring laurels to the country. they become the pride of the nation and are recognised by people all over the world. This creates a positive impact on the country as a whole and they inspire people in different walks of life. For example, Amitabh Bachan is well known for his acting skills and Lata Mangeshkar is known for her singing skills. These people not only promoted growth but also acted as brand ambassadors of the nation.
To conclude, although some people consider that resources should not be spent on art, I strongly believe that the government should provide enough motivation and support to the artists because it is the nation that is ultimately benefitted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02536231884 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56125082257 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54347826087 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4625899177 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170919212879 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05771973462 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464470532948 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106108445984 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0397412050182 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.