Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?
In recent years the boom of technological advancement and a new era of marvelous innovation, some argue the financial funding of art and redirecting of the funds to rather more ambitious projects like space exploration. However, I strongly disagree with such an argument, I am much more intrigued in supporting the funding for arts and deliberate expansion of provisions in the different fields of art.
One reason for us to not undermine the art and its aspects lyes in the very bedrock of human history. As throughout human history art has been a very kernel of our civilizations if we are ignorant that could simply make us a less civilized society. besides, there will also be chaos in our minds due to our psychological connection to art, through the centuries we have found a variety of means to express ourselves, our emotions in the form of art. Furthermore, a certain paradigm of it is seen in the age of renaissance when we came out of medieval age the new art forms like writing, paintings, and ideas which rose from the poems of great poets.so if we are to ignore art it means we are ignoring a very core structural pillar of our modern civilization.
Secondly, if we see through the very quotes of different philosophers and scholars which did ponder on such topic their remarks of it was simple chaos. furthermore, observing oneself we can understand how much part art plays in our daily lives, such as, our morning commute a playground for us to experience and feel art it's everywhere, the way people put their attire, the design on it and the design of the cartoon u just saw on your morning newspaper that is all art .contrary to that now imagine no cartoons and blank clothing with no way and sense of uniformity and pleasing designs, all of that simply adds up to a dull and slow life.
Summarizing all the points like any other thinker I can say that our ignorance of art can lead to a chaotic and colorless society. we should understand and aware people of the enormous role art plays in the everyday tasks of our life without it humans are like a blind man finding the light. instead of reducing the funding of art this is the era of increasing the funding instead of spending on wars and weapons, we should spend on imagination and innovation which will lead us to a prosperous world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65206812652 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74900197483 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542579075426 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.774566748 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.818181818 106.682146367 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.3636363636 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103718825025 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042094782588 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0191238015451 0.0667982634062 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651316972444 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00858731604846 0.056905535591 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 11.3001002004 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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