Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have the freedom to do any sports or activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There are differing views with regard to extreme sports. While many people argue that such kind of sports should be outlawed on safety grounds by government legislation, I believe that it should be free for people to participate in if they so wish.
On the one hand, there are various reasons for government to impose an official ban on dangerous sports. Firstly, it is undeniable that extreme sports have a high possibility of injuries and players sometimes put their own at life-threatening risks. Actually, there have been numerous deadly accidents that occurred related to dangerous sports such as scuba-diving or cliff-jumping. Secondly, although many strict requirements have been applied for attending extreme sports, people who are inexperienced or even out of physical conditions sometimes still take up in such activities which cause serious consequences. Such irresponsible actions just can only be prevented by banning these sports.
On the other hand, it seems to me that sports should be people freedom of choice. One reason is that while other types of sport are encouraged for a healthy lifestyle, dangerous sports should be equally allowed for people who want to challenge themselves, to build up mental health or even to have a sense of accomplishment as personal interests. For example, people who instead of choosing working out at the gym, attend tall-building jumping activities since they wish to get rid of their fear of high and also to get off their beaten path. Another reason is that modern essential sports gear and sensible precautions allow players to safely participate in such dangerous outdoor activities. In fact, people who join extreme sports nowadays are not only required to undergo short rigorous training program but also supervised by a professional expert and equipped with protection facilities from head to foot during their game.
In conclusion, although there are uncountable problems associated with dangerous sports, I would argue that it is better for the government to let people choose whatever sports they like no matter it is dangerous or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29552238806 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91441749937 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.320330389 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.461538462 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6923076923 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286031082709 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109359352032 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683496263263 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186784590178 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417933612439 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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