Some people think that the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that the raise of cheap air flights in the competitive aviation industry draws many opposite arguments among people. While many of them believe that cheap air flight takes responsibilities for air pollutions and many other issues, it seems to me cheap airfare allows middle-class people to be more liberal.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why cheap air flight should be prohibited. Firstly, it is undeniable that reducing investment in modern aircraft is the most effective solutions to compensate low airfares and to ensure for outstanding profits of almost all low-cost aviation enterprises. Consequently, such outdated aircrafts caused not only huge exhaust but also serious air accidents. Secondly, the cheaper the airfare is, the poorer the service qualities are. A cheap air flight brand in Vietnam named Viet jet illustrates for these views, it acquires reputations for small size and old aircraft models together with regular delays and worst air services.
On the other hand, it stands reasons to me that cheap air flight play an integral role in bringing people freedom. Instead of spending a long hour on train or bus, low-income people can afford flight tickets which are ten-fold time faster and more comfortable. Additionally, thanks to the cheap air flights, more people have chances to travel abroad, which used to be a luxury though, to expose new things and broaden their horizon. Furthermore, the appearances of low- cost air flight also creates a competitive environment which offers opportunities to develop not only the aviation industry but also the tourism of the host country. In fact, other flight businesses have to pay more attention to improving service qualities and promoting more which aim to attract more not only domestic but also international customers.
In conclusion, although there are many drawbacks that exist, I believe that cheap airline brings many benefits to customers, aviation industry and even the tourism of the host country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 194, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to flight'
Suggestion: to flight
...in or bus, low-income people can afford flight tickets which are ten-fold time faster ...
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Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d even the tourism of the host country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28840125392 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78763595201 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7898466821 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.769230769 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5384615385 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4615384615 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349860360703 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131353777838 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100943108513 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213121283543 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099236642118 0.056905535591 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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