Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have the freedom to do any sports or activity.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While it is believed that some extreme sports ought to be prohibited because of the possible damage they may cause, others are of the opinion that freedom should be given to participants in any sports or activity. From my perspective, although such sports may involve some potential risks, it should be up to players to choose which sports to partake in.
Advocates of banning certain sports may argue that there are barriers, even life-threatening to these kinds of sport. Participants are prone to serious or even fatal injuries. Examples can be seen in skiing and snowboarding. Head injuries are the leading cause of death and critical injury in skiing and snowboarding and range from concussions to severe traumatic brain injury. Fall, which is unavoidable in any sports let alone skiing and snowboarding, are the primary cause of traumatic brain injury. In addition, the prohibitive cost of equipment is another thing to consider. To perform extreme sports activities, it is better to get hands on the best equipment possible because a person’s life may depend on it. However, extreme sports gear can be high-priced. Additionally, these safety tools are released on a regular basis so the possession of the latest equipment is necessary all the time.
Nevertheless, I believe that people should have the autonomy to play any sports they want, regardless of their danger. This is firstly because people can gain the ability to stay centered when taking part in such kinds of sports. Extreme sports can push them to their physical and mental limits. When this happens, it is easy to lose their cool, but that can result in potentially dangerous mistakes. Individuals who regularly perform feats such as jumping out of an airplane change the chemical makeup of their minds. When this happens, they become more capable of staying calm and centered during stressful situations. Furthermore, extreme sports activities also help people have healthier hearts. Studies and research have shown that those who take active vacations have fewer chances of having a heart attack. Also, when being active, a person is reducing stress and anxiety, which in turn lessens the blood pressure.
In conclusion, I believe people are entitled to play dangerous sports if they want because of the benefits for their health and their confidence despite probable accidents and the cost of necessary equipment.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, another thing, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2007.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18604651163 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73872798425 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560723514212 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2216247212 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5714285714 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255558079336 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711016045877 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813468812825 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154345935836 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657395530862 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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