Some people think that happiness relies on the individuals. Others argue that it is affected by other factors. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this contemporary era, happiness is one of the debatable topic. Some people opine that happiness depends on the psyche of a person while opponent deem that joy is influenced by other reasons. I believe, that both of them are necessary for an individual happiness.
To begin with, the people who considers that a creature its self is responsible for happiness. Bliss for an individual is different from person to person so, there are some human beings who find there jolliness in their work, and they desire to spend much of their time on that particular work to get more happiness while it may bring agony to others. They have established a mind setup from which they can give themselves a pleasure even though there are not happy. For instance, one of my cousin work as a volunteer in a charity program when he helps new orphans or poor families so, with such work he feel satisfied and glee. That’s why cheerfulness depends on one emotions.
On the other hand, the happiness can be affected by different reasons, firstly, a good health is needed for a happiness. If a person have millions of dollars and he does not have the ability to move or communicate so, such huge amount of money cannot bring happiness to his life. For example, one of the well-known rich scientist Stephen Hawking who was paralyzed was unable to buy health for himself. Secondly, the pleasant environment, some persons get delight from the clean and silent environment. There are young and old people who avoid crowded parks and forest and like to stay in a clam environment. For sample, I myself go to on hiking to High Mountain where there is no one and get delighted from that noiseless surrounding.
To sum up, I have discussed both the sides of happiness but in my opinion, to have a happiness in a life they should have both the aspects.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 604, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
... or poor families so, with such work he feel satisfied and glee. That’s why cheerful...
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Line 2, column 664, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one emotion', 'an emotion', or simply 'emotions'?
Suggestion: one emotion; an emotion; emotions
...lee. That’s why cheerfulness depends on one emotions. On the other hand, the happiness can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68322981366 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6401241973 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3706894843 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.533333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4666666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162927930735 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543447518507 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566920089964 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121237493916 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577246495745 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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