The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city Units are measured in percentage

Essay topics:

The table shows results of surveys done in in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage?

The two tables gives information, of two surveys outcome on six sides of own city life between 1980 and 2010.
Overall, it can be seen that the education, health care and environment percentage was high in both the years whereas, transport was the least.
In 1980, most of the people were happy with health care, education and environment which were on the top of people satisfaction, where health care have captured 82% people satisfaction and education and environment was have having the same figure 72%. Shops and employment was rated almost the same 64% and 62% respectively but 22-24% have said it is neither good nor bad. Transport was the least voted for it goodness which was 52 % and 32% people favored that is bad.
Coming to 2010, where an accelerated incline was occurred in education where more than 80% people were happy with it. Health care have observed a decline of 8% as compared to 2010. After thirty years employment rose to 72% from 62%. The transport facilities have dramatically fall down where it was like by only 39%, the figure was almost the same as people who were not satisfied.

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Average: 7.9 (49 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'have been having'?
Suggestion: have been having
...ction and education and environment was have having the same figure 72%. Shops and employme...
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ction and education and environment was have having the same figure 72%. Shops and e...
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Line 4, column 181, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed a decline of 8% as compared to 2010. After thirty years employment rose to 72% fro...
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Line 4, column 276, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'fallen'.
Suggestion: fallen
... transport facilities have dramatically fall down where it was like by only 39%, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.796875 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53676555241 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0483513618 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.333333333 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0710400891683 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369148762202 0.103423049105 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641148157498 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702327073472 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.082484741147 0.0819641961636 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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