Some people think that History is one of the most important school subjects while others think that in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Living in an information era, some people believe that the advances of technology have prompted the revolution of our ways of living and thus represent the most important subject for students in school. Others maintain that, history, filled with stories and lessons, paves our way to developing into a fully-fledged person. While both perspectives have merits, I tend toward the view that Science and Technology evolve to be the most significant discipline in this age occupied with renovations.
To begin with, early exposure to state-of-the-art scientific researches and technologies proves to be an edge that would help students quickly adapt to a working environment. Regardless of the occupation, computer science is pushing the boundaries of what human beings can achieve with the aid of artificial intelligence and machine learning. For instance, university graduates without an IT background are not as competitive as those who have started learning Python, a frequently used programming language, from a young age. Thus, learning updated skills in the technological field is imperative and a prerequisite for a prestigious career.
That being said, many people might argue that a certain amount of historical knowledge helps mould students into resilient and perseverant characters. Having seen various historical successes and failures, people have a greater chance to hold on in adverse situations in their personal and career life. However, in modern workplace, where flexibility and life-long learning are much appreciated, this might mean failure of adjustment. By contrast, people who seem to be less patient of personal mistakes and more tolerant of novel techniques will quickly be more adept to the ever-changing market needs. In other words, having a good command of history is not as much an advantage as emerging skills that suit the need.
With the above in mind, it is clear that both disciplines are essential, however, the time invested in learning up-to-date scientific and technological skills will present people with an unique advantage in this ever-changing job market, whereas the resilience provided by history learning might make people more conservative to embrace changes, thereby less favored by recruiters.
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...logical skills will present people with an unique advantage in this ever-changing ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54941860465 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07461820544 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607558139535 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9913926609 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.846153846 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4615384615 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146829634849 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484423466371 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495825098548 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092009695095 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675857811713 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.