Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is suggested by some people that people are faced with too many choices these days. I completely agree with this notion that the choices are overwhelmingly bewildering and will outline my arguments as follows.
The most prominent reason for an excessive amount of choices is the progressive trend of industrialisation. In response to people’s ever-increasing need for convenience and their pursuit for uniqueness, companies are nowadays investing heavily in supplying people with a tremendous pool of choices, which is consequently confusing rather than beneficial. The clothing industry is a telling example. Given the variety of brands, materials, and styles, eventually, making a choice of which T-shirt to buy would end up costing too much time, not to mention that more often than not, the different choices do not represent a large difference in essence. For this reason, the development of manufacturing industry provides us with probably more choices than we need.
Alongside the influence of industrialization, globalization is further compounding the issue of a redundancy of choices. As it gets easier and easier to travel to any corner of the world, students who choose to broaden their horizon by getting further education abroad are confronted with essential yet worrying decisions to make: which continent they would be going and which university they are going to apply for. While people generally consider it as an edge in comparison with several decades ago, when cross-country journey was immensely difficult to make, the decisions are just too important that students might just apply to as many post-graduate programs as possible. It is not surprising that this might be at the expense of opportunities to more prestigious universities had they narrowed their choices and invested all energy into applying the ones they wanted the most. In other words, extravagant choices might be distracting.
Taking the above into account, it would be clear that the choices people are granted nowadays are too many for reasons of industrialization and globalization. It is more bewildering for people than beneficial. People need to be cautious so as not to get immersed with the excessive choices.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, so, while, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39367816092 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20474709616 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557471264368 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.7409458119 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.133333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203709149333 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741245935283 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674261114391 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15300761284 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646063215868 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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