Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is true that the question of whether organizing international sports events has benefits or not remains a source of controversy. While a number of people believe that such events pose a negative influence, I would argue that hosting these events is beneficial to a country.
On the one hand, a section of individuals thinks that an international sports competition would induce some serious problems in the host country. One of the evident problems is that the government needs to build new or renovate existing sports facilities, which means that they have to spend a huge sum of money on such investments. Consequently, other vital sectors like public health and education may suffer from a shortage of income for their development. Furthermore, when the tournament is being held, tourists from all over the world will flock to the host country. The massive movement might threaten national security as some terrorists or criminals might come to the country for illegal purposes.
On the other hand, I believe that the option to organize an international sports competition is attractive for some reasons. First, Since many reporters, spectators, etc will travel across the border to witness the moment, it gives a novel opportunity for the nation to boost the tourism sector and become a popular destination even long after the competition has concluded. Second, by building infrastructure to host an event of such a scale, it leads to massive construction work. This means that it gives employment to the poor as well-skilled people, which in turn leads to a boom in the economy.
In conclusion, while hosting an international sports competition offers certain drawbacks, I completely agree with those who believe that hosting international sporting events is beneficial to the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, may, second, so, well, while, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24652777778 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02720233765 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2616145265 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287156742687 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975633284968 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792393668158 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171252108982 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275869865562 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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