Globalisation is the key factor to improve business and cultural contact between different nations of the world. This also means more and more people around the world are being similar. However, this situation results in both advantages and disadvantages which I will discuss further.
First and foremost, there are many advantages associated with globalisation. One of the most important contribution is that it provides employment to millions of people. Multinational companies are opening up their business in different parts, which paves way for most of the unemployed people. Secondly, there is a more efficient trade of goods within the nations that helps in improvising the economies of developing nations. Moreover, people have more opportunities to travel and get to know about different cultures.
Contrast to the advantages, there are some disadvantages linked to this. One of those is people with different attitudes, varied cultural backgrounds live together in the foreign countries, due to which there is a chance for them to follow other country traditions, forgetting their own food and surprisingly, their mother tongue too.
However, I feel that it is a narrow definition of national identities. It mostly depends on our cultural traditions we follow but not on the present situation. For example, in my country, India, our traditions are completely different to the western countries. For instance, we may see different kind of clothes, but we never address our elders by their names, which is mostly done by western people. Indeed, they feel it comfortable and appreciate that. I believe that after knowing other cultures, the respect to my culture indeed increased.
To conclude, despite the demerits linked to globalisation, there are many advantages associated with it. I agree that trade with the foreign countries yield more positive results compared to negative ones.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46440677966 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98775438121 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572881355932 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8151278909 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5555555556 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153011832989 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445213864074 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359191451126 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0835660891323 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283262008297 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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