In recent years, the use of social media replaces face-to-face interaction among many people in society. It is argued whether this development is beneficial for individuals' relationships or it has led to loneliness. In my opinion, the large use of internet and its online appilications has worsen the communication skills.
On the one hand, supporters of communication through internet state that it results only in merits for people's socialization. In the past, the avenues were more limited for everybody to discuss with others anytime they want to. By contrast, nowadays,dDue to the constant internet connection, social media, beggining with Facebook and applications like Instagram and TikTok, open up possibilities for extrovert persons to interact with their friends, relatives or colleagues. This applies to life success stories like the various instagram artists and models who interact with their followers and their fan bases, as well as more modest examples, like our neighbors who became more sociable and gregarious by using the internet.
On the other hand, defenders of internet's use for social reasons, like me, opine that it has degraded the general quality of communication and it has causes isolation. That most affected are the younger people, who, today, are more likely to communicate by texting and interacting with others through comments in Instagram as they impatiently scroll through various feeds. In contrast, they should develop their interpersonal skills by telling jokes and arguing about personal and political topics. This type of communication causes loneliness and has pshychologically affected a lot of people. According to a recent survey, the suicide rates has increased, especially among teenagers, in UK because of the absence of in person discussions, since there the use of the internet and online applications is the norm for socialization.
To sum up, internet users are hurt in terms of communication, especially the young population has become more introvert than ever.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: worsened
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Suggestion: , dDue
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, in contrast, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51446945338 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1283215823 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578778135048 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 4.76152304609 273% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3443868066 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.923076923 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119889533862 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448039364412 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353956141211 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0776726928051 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207192880471 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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