Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending schools.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is undeniably true that school plays significant role in children’s prosperity, leading to happiness in their life. In terms of school’s well-being, more and more people from all over the world have engaged with spiritual debate that whether it would prove better benefit for school children to be instructed as detached. (Either or) In this essay, I will discuss both aspects and give my vision, as well as there will be a logical conclusion.
On the one hand, it would be considerable that separating school can be far more beneficial than mixing both youths, because of erratic relationship, which could later disturb children to perform such school responsibility as independent work or homework so on. Let’s take Land of the Rising sun as example, most of Japanese schools have separated to intend to draw children attention for only lesson. By doing so, only self-development have being concerned by those adolescent, chasing education. As a result, they children will deserve outfit of what have they done.
On the second hand, mixing both adolescents could be far more beneficial than separate, as individual will be able to communicate other gender. For instance, my aunt have graduated National University of Mongolia recently. In terms of her ability, she have acquired one of the crucial ability that access of communicate any people wish. In the result, she have been working as teacher, which require as long as community, moreover, by doing so, she is extracting big amount of money as salary. Similarly, students who studied in mixed school would obtain plenty of new skills.
In conclusion, however we human’s thoughts have divided into such two views, both schools would approve plenty of importance in well manner, and boys and girls have a right to choose a school they like
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to outfit'
Suggestion: to outfit
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
... recently. In terms of her ability, she have acquired one of the crucial ability tha...
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Line 3, column 357, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...ate any people wish. In the result, she have been working as teacher, which require ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, second, similarly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15202702703 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89242662081 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611486486486 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2889130416 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.307692308 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146678474624 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0466573796752 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048388351078 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976284735483 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451024471804 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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