Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time
What we should do in the spare time is a controversial issue in the contemporary life. Some people believe doing some leisure activities is crucial for broadening our minds while others think to take a respite is essential for health. Both points of view will be analyzed in this argument before the reasoned conclusion is found.
On the one hand, spending the leisure time doing recreational activities such as reading and playing scrabble promote the brain's ability which will make them more intellectual and brilliant. This is evident by the researches done on this point that explain the answering IQ quizzes and solving puzzles boost human mindset efficiently. In addition, the leisure pursuits like reading books and writing novels cultivate critical thinking and enrich the horizon. Therefore, in the developed countries they support their citizens to do such activities by creating E-libraries and building public libraries including books in all fields.
On the other hand, people's minds are not machines working 24 hours. Therefore they need to take a rest by relaxing on rocking chairs or spending sometimes on the beach as a silent observer will refresh their minds. If we don't pay enough to take a rest and sleep for a time, we will feel exhausted and can cause stress and many health diseases.
To recapitulate, however taking a rest a respite for a time is essential for refreshing our minds, doing mind activities in the free time is so more important for developing IQ abilities and improving the frame of mind.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'brains'' or 'brain's'?
Suggestion: brains'; brain's
...eading and playing scrabble promote the brains ability which will make them more intel...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...inds are not machines working 24 hours. Therefore they need to take a rest by relaxing on...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...bserver will refresh their minds. If we dont pay enough to take a rest and sleep for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ties and improving the frame of mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14229249012 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73156561947 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2710083692 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72727272727 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401571253053 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126940706332 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113060536554 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232006909636 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738572165717 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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