Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this ultra-modern era, we have so many option to spent our extra time. Some section of society opine that time should be spent with some brain activity by reading books and playing game. However, other public in favor to not doing any such activity and feel peace of mind in the rest time. I pesonally believe that indeed both have their own importance and both are equaly required.
On the one hand, When we looking about former view, we have too much option for entertain our self and we easily spend lot of time by watching television and using social media. Instead of these, we should use our precious time for develop our self. We could use our leasure time by reading new books and playing some intresing mind games, which will help us to improve our knowlege and imagination. It is realy difficult to do this, but it is win-win situation for both side. By this you can relex your self and using extra time for excel your ability. Moreover these type of mind activity help us to develop our skill to face any kind of difficult situation in the future. For Example, According to servey of oxford university, Who are playing advance mind game, in that 62% persons have got benefit in their professional life.
On the one hand, When we go with later view, people become workholic to fullfill their modern life style. By consiquences, this hectic life load huge stress on the mind. Therefore, it is really important to use extra time to maintaine our peace of mind. For that we should do any stress releaving activity which will provide peace to mind and relax our self, such activity like to do meditation or yoga which have no any heavy physical or mental activity involved. Furthermore, these will provide feeling of fresh and energetic to our self.
In conclusion, I believe that we should spend our further time judiciously and divide task between brain exercise and mind resting. Because both are helping us to rise our ability and to releave our anxiety and stress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun option seems to be countable; consider using: 'many options'.
Suggestion: many options
In this ultramodern era we have so many option to spent our extra time Some section of...
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Line 3, column 407, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ike to do meditation or yoga which have no any heavy physical or mental activity i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 24.0651302605 199% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57593123209 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25092743762 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495702005731 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 349.0 20.2975951904 1719% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1597.0 106.682146367 1497% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 349.0 20.7667163134 1681% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 105.0 7.06120827912 1487% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29204721103 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.29204721103 0.084324248473 346% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193746384526 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698083483305 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 174.6 13.0946893788 1333% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -274.3 50.2224549098 -546% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 138.2 11.3001002004 1223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.76 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 24.34 8.58950901804 283% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 141.6 10.1190380762 1399% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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