Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
It is argued that people will gain more benefits when playing team sports. Other people, however, believe that it is more advantageous to engage in individual sports such as golf or tennis. I personally agree with the second group.
On the one hand, playing team sports can bring about several advantages. Firstly, people playing these sports need to cooperate with other team members to reach the same goal, which can boost their teamwork skill. Take football as an example, football players have to work together to put the ball into opponent’s net. This skill would be useful for their future career, for their office workers are usually required to handle tasks together to achieve company’s success. Secondly, team sports players could have more opportunities to meet new people and make new friends. This can build up their network which is highly beneficial to their work.
However, I support the point of view that people should choose to play solo sports. The first reason is that people who engage in these sports tend to develop their self independence instead of relying on other members. For instance, when a player wants to win a match of tennis, he has to try his hardest as there is no one to depend on. As a result, they would have abilities to overcome bigger obstacles in life. Additionally, it could be easier to maintain schedule training for participants in individual sports. This is because if they play with a number of other players, they would hardly organise suitable time for all team members.
In conclusion, although some people prefer to play team sports because of its benefits, I believe that playing individual sports is more beneficial.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00711743772 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58649096998 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583629893238 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5473354659 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.9375 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199587425636 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682523425102 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571715276997 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142319045851 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327557807498 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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