Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In modern times,The issue of studying environment has become a topic of discussion.there are those who say that studying in group is better while others argue that studying alone is effective.In this essay I will examine both the sides of the issue and provide my overall opinion

there are a wide range of reasons why students believe that studying alone is effective.The main reason that I agree with the my opinion is because students concentration may be deviated when preparing in a group.For instance during my semester exams i went to my friends hostel where i planned to study all the night .But i ended up without finishing my entire syllabus.this is because one of my friend started an argument over my academics,which took an hour of my preparation time.we also felt hungry and went to a restaurant .It killed almost 2 hours my preparation time.As a result I lost my interest of studying that night and didn't perform well in the morning.Unlike the past,this time I took wrong decision of studying in group.If i would have prepared in my room i would have performed well.

Despite these arguments,there are reasons to disagree with above statements because there are some of success stories of my friends who studied in group and topped the exam.For instance one of my friend in that night had topped the exam even though he spent the time with us.this is because he concentrated teachers lectures during the class hours which we failed to do.As a result he also ranked top in our department.

In conclusion this issue about studying environment is most complicated issue with no easy answers.I belive that considering both the sides of the issue i would take a partial stand over this issue

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90034364261 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88103702615 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549828178694 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 97.0 20.2975951904 478% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 377.785065289 49.4020404114 765% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 475.333333333 106.682146367 446% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 97.0 20.7667163134 467% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.6666666667 7.06120827912 363% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173025638984 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993960088454 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055655221634 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111701872446 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063608315077 0.056905535591 112% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 50.1 13.0946893788 383% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.52 50.2224549098 -37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 39.9 11.3001002004 353% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.14 8.58950901804 141% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.8 10.1190380762 403% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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