While some folks claim that growing more trees in an open field in metropolises and urban areas is absolutely crucial than providing numerous housing, i also agree that planting trees ought to be put a top priority over housing. This essay will discuss firstly the significance of offering a shelter, and secondly, the paramount positive impacts of trees with relevant examples.
To begin with, the economy tends to expand when there are increased residences. As a large number of workers typically dwell outside the city centre, affording homes can save travelling time that is instrumental in raising savings. So housing can derive immense satisfactions among employees because the residence relieves considerable stresses which are a key obstacle between workers to become remarkably productive. Next, the significant reduction in the crime rate is also the major gain of providing sufficient homes since most anti-social activities are undertaken by people who are usually homeless according to the study. Moreover, the shelter is a radical requisite of a human life.
However, i strongly believe that planting massive trees is substantially more vital than the housing owing to the following two reasons. Primarily, if people are emboldened to raise plants and trees, not only would sowing shrubs create a peaceful living atmosphere which promotes poor healths but also they could preserve fragile ecosystems. On the second place, air and sound pollutions that remain the leading roots of chronic obstructive diseases and hearing loss are combated because trees release oxygen and the structure of trees acts as a powerful sound absorber. Furthermore, what people are gaining additional benefits is a marked decrement in the amount of greenhouse gases, which can certainly add fuel to global warming, by the abundant leaves. This ascertains why sowing more trees is truly imperative as opposed to housing.
In conclusion, presumably, considering the creation of pleasant environment and a considerable minimisation of pollution, housing is nowhere near as influential as trees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...when there are increased residences. As a large number of workers typically dwell outside the cit...
Line 5, column 216, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'sow'
... raise plants and trees, not only would sowing shrubs create a peaceful living atmosph...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51713395639 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90563872264 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669781931464 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4991178475 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.230769231 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243986911881 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686105255589 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931840563774 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121023923718 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108423711232 0.056905535591 191% => OK
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
in the third paragraph reasons, there are only some advantages of planting trees. but we can't figure out that it is more important than housing. need little bit comparisons.
we may argue in the third paragraph like:
crowded housing may create issues like: pollution, noise, crimes, while planting more trees in open areas can help remove those problems.
also in the long run, people are looking for higher quality of lives. so need to keep balance of the open areas and housing.
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 321 350
No. of Characters: 1729 1500
No. of Different Words: 212 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.233 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.386 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.832 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 136 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 115 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.692 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.633 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.846 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.321 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.545 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.024 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5