Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
many people state that having a trip to other regions to learn about cultures and people is unnecessary because books, films and the internet can provide essential knowledge about them. In my opinion, while books, and modern devices can help people to find out about the information about culture of each region, people should also have actual experience.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why it can be more effective if people get real travel. Firstly, information from books, movies and the internet are based on people’ opinions and attitudes so they may convey some wrong messages and lead to cultural misunderstanding. For example, many people think that British people are conservative and unfriendly, but if they have a chance to approach them, they might recognize that these people are nice and also fun. Secondly, if they travel to other places, they can have an opportunity to boost cultural communication with local people. Moreover, we can interact with them to experience about their habits and customs, as well as tell them about culture in their region.
On the other hand, it is better for people to learn foreign cultures via books and videos. By reading books, watching films and surfing the internet, people can find information anytime or anywhere. Consequently, people do not need to spend money and time for traveling. Furthermore, in recent days, most of people have huge workloads so they do not have adequate time for having a real experience. because of that, books, videos and internet are the ideal ways for them to learn about other cultures, due to the degree of convenience that they bring to these people.
In conclusion, while learning cultures by books, films and the internet can be useful, I also recommend people should have actual experience about the culture of each region.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04620462046 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6023264501 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514851485149 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9789808326 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.615384615 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8461538462 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275831626534 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119086304211 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509494951264 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189263679346 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432656449044 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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