Some people think that it's best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue to it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Life is the name of constant struggle and everyone makes efforts for its betterment. According to some people thinking if uncertain conditions encountered by like having not standard employment source or run out of cash best will be to live with it. In contrast, others think that to strive for the betterment of such circumstances. It is not appropriate to lose courage instead do some hard work and learn extra skills. In this essay, we are going to discuss both sides of perspective and opinion about it.
Firstly, although with unfavourable financial conditions constant struggling and hardships become part of life. And only those people who work a lot with determination and courage obviously come out one day. Because trying, again and again, leads to perfection and can easily understanding to do smartly. For example, people who prefer to build their business rather than underworked, though have to pass through a hard time but with persistence can develop successfully such as Steve jobs started iPhone company.
Secondly, if you think that the current job is not satisfactory than learning more skills and experiences would be advantages. By taking certain online courses on computer knowledge is also beneficial because all factories either large or small require such literates. In the current situation of jobs recession in the market candidates with experience preferred by employees.
On the other hand, losing hope and optimistic behaviour is not the best thing to perform to cope with bad circumstances. The people who don't try remain the same situations forever. And in lack of finances to support the family is not sufficient then other aliments follow its footsteps like poverty and questionable health. Because of poor infrastructure in third world countries, malnutrition and underage death are very common.
In conclusion, remaining in poor conditions and accepting it can be a point of view but not the best option but to work hard and struggle is a better choice to make. In my point of view rather than living with awful financial and social conditions, endeavour to defeat it back.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'understanding doing'.
Suggestion: understanding doing
...ain, leads to perfection and can easily understanding to do smartly. For example, people who prefer...
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Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'understand'
Suggestion: understand
...ain, leads to perfection and can easily understanding to do smartly. For example, people who ...
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Line 4, column 136, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... with bad circumstances. The people who dont try remain the same situations forever....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1778.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18367346939 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89968330431 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618075801749 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6284409211 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.7777777778 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211709584654 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059503885097 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053231574886 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105184534598 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365458472104 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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