Some people think that it will better for the large companies and industries to move to regional areas outside large urban centers.
Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
The proposal in moving the multinational companies outside the cities is an argument both supported and refuted by many. While some believe that this will be beneficial as to promote economic growth in rural areas, others think that it will not be favorable to the company. It is agreed that the advantages outweigh disadvantages as it will be discussed.
The major factor to consider in relocating the factories in rural places is economic growth. As this means that more jobs will be generated and people’s quality of life will improve. For example, in the recent survey at the University of Queensland, it concluded that when businesses are spread in the adjacent towns, more residents become employed resulting in the improvement in people’s life. Furthermore, it can also lead to an increase tax collections, making it sufficient to meet the needs of its residents. All of these are the positive indicators of economic growth. In contrast, if the rural areas were not converted into a business district, the town will not progress and still belong to a backward society.
The downside effect of massive transformation of the town into an industrial park is the cost of relocation. A huge amount of outflow will be required for a company to reconstruct their infrastructure which includes the manufacturing plants and the satellite offices. The rate of return for this investment will take them a long time to recover and this will have a negative effect on the expected income of the company.
In conclusion, I supported the argument that the advantage of economic growth that has a beneficial effect on the society greatly outweigh the relocation cost and late return of investment by the company. It is projected that more companies will be encouraged to do business outside the city.
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.237804878049 0.247107183377 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.15243902439 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0975609756098 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0213414634146 0.0501214627716 43% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0335365853659 0.0437548338989 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.143292682927 0.122226691241 117% => OK
Participles: 0.0426829268293 0.0403226058552 106% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.00169813669 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0274390243902 0.0326793684256 84% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.143292682927 0.0861772015684 166% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0335365853659 0.021408717616 157% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00914634146341 0.011925033212 77% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1810.0 1933.35771543 94% => OK
No of words: 297.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.09427609428 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380471380471 0.374742101984 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.299663299663 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.252525252525 0.203846283523 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.151515151515 0.137316102897 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00169813669 2.80594681477 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.037074148 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531986531987 0.56093040696 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 54.1623581567 60.7387585426 89% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2142857143 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2696399399 49.517814964 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.285714286 127.492653851 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 51.1806156806 49.1944974215 104% => OK
Elegance: 2.04411764706 1.69124875643 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388151786052 0.332605444948 117% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125385746608 0.102741220458 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0930864040617 0.0668466124924 139% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.587926126528 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15148617442 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183457544617 0.134430193775 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650876199106 0.0742795772207 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.476361853428 0.324371583561 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0247866956147 0.0638462369009 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.298830538966 0.228012699653 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562820187292 0.058150111329 97% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 3.0 5.90881763527 51% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 5.0 10.4468937876 48% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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