After the industrial revolution, cities are developed rapidly. Due to this development loads of manufactures and companies has been built in the center of the city. Besides, some folks reckon that these facilities should locate outside of the downtown. According to this, It is beneficial for reduction of pollution but on the other hand, it could tough to the people who work in that workplaces.
The obvious argument in its favor is that factories are emitting plenty of wastes and pollution. Because those are usually use raw materials to make their own goods. This processing requires the large amount of chemical substances and fuels. Those substances impact humans health and fuels produce smokes through the air and it turns to the air pollution. Another one example, we use 2300 liters of water to produce only one jeans and after this process factories pour that used water to the rivers. If those facilities move to the suburban areas, those matters can be solved.
There are, however, some drawbacks. That facilities workers are need to make decision that stay in the city and find another job or move to the local area that outside of the urban. If the worker is single, it would be not that big problem but if he or she has family, it could be difficult to their family members especially for children that because they need to leave their school and friends. In addition, those who decided to quite their work, have to stay unemployed until get new job. That would be the possible disadvantage of this situation.
To sum up, in contemporary society, facilities are developed center of the urban cities, but lately people want to move them out of the city. It has advantage that citizens may live in healthy environment but possible disadvantage maybe workers could be suffer.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mitting plenty of wastes and pollution. Because those are usually use raw materials to ...
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Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
...nd pollution. Because those are usually use raw materials to make their own goods. ...
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Line 3, column 422, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one jean', 'a jean', or simply 'jeans'?
Suggestion: one jean; a jean; jeans
...se 2300 liters of water to produce only one jeans and after this process factories pour t...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an areas, those matters can be solved. There are, however, some drawbacks. That...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, in addition, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92434210526 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55755891436 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3721361731 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0588235294 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52941176471 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178238846372 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051811670226 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414153413081 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101282047628 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393283637676 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.