Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction, a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that being content with career is more beneficial for people than gainful employment, while other people disagree with this and think that having a permanent occupation is more important for well-being. This essay agrees that job satisfaction is highly unlikely situation in people lives, but it does not mean to have hateful position. This essay will discuss both points of view.
It is clear that achieving happiness at work is among people's top goals in life. But it can happen that people, trying to have joyful position should choose between high salaries and job satisfaction. In addition, such work can just cover their living expenditure and restrict investments in hobbies, making peoples being unhappy. It is therefore disagree that job satisfaction is more important than well-paid job. For example, a 2020 study found that during a recent lockdown people who have a permanent job demonstrated better reactions on isolation that those who was satisfied with job and do not have any hobby.
However, many disagree with this and feel that searching for joyful work is a meaningless way of life. Such category of people believes that a permanent job brings to workers financial security that allows them not only pay for living expenses but have a different hobbies, some of which can be very expensive. In other words people try to enjoy life outside working sites instead of attain happiness at work. For instance, resent research revealed that many Ukrainian office workers built their careers in big companies due to reach monetary freedom.
In conclusion, while the benefits of having permanent career are obvious, some still rashly believe that to be satisfied with job is worthwhile factor and people should be aimed at it. However, as long as people keep a balance between looking for joy at work and financial security they are enhancing well-being.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ied with job and do not have any hobby. However, many disagree with this and fee...
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...or living expenses but have a different hobbies, some of which can be very expensive. I...
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...ompanies due to reach monetary freedom. In conclusion, while the benefits of hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13268608414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59591309185 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7595874125 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.285714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.329329430755 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11619396625 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106139621455 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211490869236 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793878197407 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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