In this day and age, an increasing number of contemporaries are paying attention to whether it is more important for people to feel satisfied with that they do or to find a longer-term job. Personally, I believe both types of job could provide people a range of benefits, it depends on what benefits they wish to achieve and what job they prefer.
Those who support the idea of doing a passionate job claim that, without happiness and satisfaction, people, especially the youngsters would be easily bored then quit the job. For example, an officer of conflicting bosses would always be stressed and depressed, even afraid that the bosses would come down on him whenever he does not submit deadlines on time or fails to do business. As a result, the officer are under constant pressure an then leave the job despite the well-paid salaries. Therefore, satisfaction in job is the most influential factor to contribute to an efficient labour frequency.
On the other hand, in today's cut-throat labour market where thousands of new and talented candidates face unemployment, staying in the same job is a better choice than switching job to look for satisfaction. Many people experience temporary unemployment after quitting their previous job to look for new ones that offers them higher level of satisfaction. For those who are the primary breadwinners, this is a risky decision. Therefore, it is observed that, nowadays, a growing number of people accept being insulted horribly to earn money to enhance their lifestyles, their living standards and stand in elite people.
From these above mentioned reasons, the conclusion can be drawn that although there are several opinions that a permanent job is more important than job security, I still believe that people should find a job that offer the, enough material needs and satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...the officer are under constant pressure an then leave the job despite the well-pai...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: AN_THEN[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'and then'?
Suggestion: and then
...the officer are under constant pressure an then leave the job despite the well-paid sal...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: THE_PUNCT[1]
Message: Did you forget something after 'the'?
...hat people should find a job that offer the, enough material needs and satisfaction....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, still, then, therefore, well, for example, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12624584718 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88065731288 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607973421927 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0597667068 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.272727273 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388135104434 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138041404065 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977305104193 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246064499047 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847939194998 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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