Being happy is one of the most crucial factors. Some people hold the belief that having an adequate money brings happiness, while others assert that processing too much money would lead to problems. This essay aims to discuss both views in detail and arrives to the logical conclusion.
Money is the major factor that brings changes to one's life. It is observed that, nowadays, more and more people are becoming materialistic and striving to earn more money as much as possible in order to enhance their lifestyles, their living standard and stand in elite people. Therefore, there is no doubt in admitting that money does bring happiness. However, the point here to understand is that everyone has different meanings of money. For example, people living in the deserted areas, for them, having decent meals and clean water is happiness, while a person of high class of society, for him, happiness is traveling around the world and buying newly luxurious car.
On the other hand, although having an adequate amount of money brings happiness,having too much would lead to problems. Lust of money is nothing but a waste of time. For example, people who spend their whole life earning money, neglect their health, eventually get sick and all the savings would be spent for medical expenditure. Moreover, a millionaire is often worried about the safety of his money. It is observed that, nowadays, several people become targets of robberies, thief even murderers and many other crimes. Therefore, we cannot go without asserting having superabundant money could put people in danger.
From these above mentioned reasons, the conclusion can be drawn that having money has double-edge impacts on people's lives. Despite the fact that it brings happiness, it is overweighted by the drawbacks ranging from mental health to safety problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'adequate money'.
Suggestion: adequate money
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , having
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17785234899 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58538482146 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4955824695 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330699473072 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108646516926 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621973717128 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210770660551 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770413069253 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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