Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others think that people cannot expect to enjoy a job and having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People have a different views about whether we choose a firmed occupation or pleasured job. As my point of view, I believe that both of views have its distinctive merits as will be discussed shortly.
On the one hand, it is obvious that people who are satisfied themselves will find more motivative on their working-environment. To be more specific, a job with excellent rate of wage, good insurance and generous retirement package is considered more attractive than these of tedious in treating staffs in company. Therefore, job candidates may have happier sense in their lives and consquenctly increasing their loyalty as well as responsibility to their work, which is also more important to the companies. Moreover, individuals feel pleasured through the senses of achievement which they received from work and this kind of feeling could encourage people to work harder, which will contribute t the whole society in the long-term.
On the other hand, there are strong reasons why holding down a same job for a long time appeals to many adults. First, people would benefit from better job prospect, which include promotion opportunities and pay rise, if they stayed in a job a long turn. As experience and commitment are both taken into consideration when a company decides who to promote or to dismiss, those who work longer for an organization stand a higher chance of moving up the ladder and earning a more lucrative living. In addition, in some cases, individuals working in a permanent job that suits either their skill or personality, so it turns out that they become less ambitous to search for another jobs.
In conclusion, I firmly argue that either job satisfication or a decent job will have its own benefits that people should take into consideration for some factors as mentioned above
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'view'?
Suggestion: view
People have a different views about whether we choose a firmed occupa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05685618729 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95389114042 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.3792506107 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.454545455 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6363636364 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332491837442 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128490965213 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624568272759 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208859379418 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157259093376 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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