Some people think that mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries, shops and on public transport.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
To a certain extent, I agree that cell phones shouldn't be used in public places such as libraries, shops and on public transport. However, I also think that the benefits of mobile phones outweigh the drawbacks.
There are two main reasons why phones can be a problem in some public areas. One reason is that ringing phones not only cause disturbances in libraries, cinemas, and school lessons but also be a dangerous distraction. For instance, using a phone while driving reduces the driver's concentration and as a result, traffic accidents are dramatically increasing nowadays. Furthermore, some people are not aware that others can hear their conversations due to the fact that they are in communal places.
Apart from the practical disadvantages expressed above, I believe that mobile phones are the most popular gadget in today's world. Digital phones have revolutionized the way we communicate in a way that users can send text messages, surf the Internet, take photos, listen to music wherever we are. Sometimes, workers feel uncomfortable and tedious so they decided to change their working environment into a more open one. Therefore, they have to take cell phones to those places in order to easily complete their tasks. Mobiles have also become fashion accessories because they represent a person's status in society.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believed that people will benefits a great deal from mobile phones so they shouldn't be banned in public places, instead, we need to use these phones with care.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: shouldn't
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'benefit'
Suggestion: benefit
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, so, therefore, while, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17391304348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78757305097 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616600790514 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1765944864 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.083333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259200852951 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955373167966 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985021151094 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188863103286 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111898466962 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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