To succeed in a business, one needs to know maths. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
To a certain extent, I agree that a person has to know maths to thrive in the business industry. However, I also argue that life experience and personal qualities are two important factors that can help you become an outstanding entrepreneur.
There are two main reasons why some people think that one must be a mathematician in order to excel in business. One reason is that mathematics courses in university are a requirement for graduation for all business majors. This is because it is essential not only for those running a small business or shop to be able to do good book-keeping but also as a foundational skill for Wall Street brokers, bankers, entrepreneurs, accountants, and marketers. Furthermore, one application of business mathematics is to provide statistics that can predict future scenarios. These predictions might lay a firm foundation for more informed and evidence-based decisions, replacing those based on managers’ gut feelings.
Apart from the practical benefits expressed above, I believe that there are more vital elements to business success such as past life experiences, good personality traits. Firstly, it is clear that a lot of individuals have managed to become a millionaire or even billionaire through their work and devotion, however, the most well-known one must be Bill Gates. Since he always cares about public health and the healthcare system, Bill and his wife have the biggest charity fund in the globe called Gates Foundation, which had a purpose to help people all around the world with difficulties in their lives, particularly the health sector, therefore, consumers love to buy his products as they know their money will be used in the right way, and he will be wealthier. Secondly, a businessman should experience a lot and from that learn many lessons such as market prediction, etc. That individual also should be the one who has leadership ability and team spirit when working with others, this will help them keep moving up to their career ladder and success in the long-term future.
In conclusion, mathematical ability can help inform businesses but it is not as essential as other internal qualities. The ideal business person has an understanding, care for the community, and level up their strengths into a trait that no one else has.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1923.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.128 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99212120967 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.0717926643 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.357142857 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7857142857 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17135319777 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619380241584 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662050006466 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106624255091 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412266260257 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.