Some people think in this modern world, getting old is entirely bad. However, others believe that the life of old people is much better now than in the past. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Getting old is a natural stage for all human beings. Some people argue that bad things along with physical restraint and appearance when they are old, I still believe that the elderly in the modern era have a higher standard of living now than in the past.
On the one hand, various reasons leave behind the getting older makes them unhappy. First and foremost, the one who lives his retired life independently and earns his living becomes dependent on other people. There are very few jobs for retired people, so life becomes very challenging for them not only financially but also socially. As a result, the elderly pose an enormous burden on the family due to their inability to do household chores and care for their children. Furthermore, old people have various spare time, so they usually think of sleep all the time which makes them depressed or physically ill.
It seems to me that the elderly have a better standard of living now than in the previous days for several reasons. The first reason is that older people are now living a much better life as compared to the past due to the initiatives taken by the government. The authorities invest in constructing the old age homes, in case they do not have shelter, and allow them to use public transport without payment. Also the annual medical treatment with cutting-edge technology. Nevertheless, with the development of technology, robots can be in charge of doing household chores and caring for children. As a result, the elderly can relax by using smartphones to communicate with people all around the world and share their thoughts and ideas.
Generally speaking, despite the change in body conditions that can not be avoided when you get older, benefits and welfare from modern society are doing good to maintain certain life qualities of the elderly. Therefore, the elderly in this era are living much better than in the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87925696594 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5499110594 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557275541796 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0727549876 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239056041385 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784403402778 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738945485935 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160744061606 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680078883183 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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