Some people think that in the modern world, we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There has been a heated debate on whether people are becoming more or less dependent these days. In my opinion, while there might be some factors that allow people to do less tasks than before, I would argue that a person’s independence has increased significantly through this era.
On the one hand, the innovation of technology has resulted in people’s dependence. It is undeniable that our era is witnessing a speedy development in technology. It allows people to purchasing products without going out of their house or even working from home. Those improvements would then male people become lazier and dependent on the technology or services. However, I believed that people depend on technology just to make their life more independent.
On the other hand, thanks to the advancement of technology, people are more independent than ever before. Innovative equipment and services have assisted people on completing daily tasks and have alowed them to have a better control of their life. For example, primary school children now can do all the daily tasks if they sre helped by a smart phone. They could order a ride to school themselves as well as buy food ore use online maps to go back houses. They can also search the Internet to find an answer to hard question without parents’ help.
In conclusion, it seems to me that people nowadays are more independent sue to the assisting of advance technology.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun tasks is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...be some factors that allow people to do less tasks than before, I would argue that a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02109704641 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78835600873 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645569620253 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1105560349 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5384615385 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26536136342 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092407796908 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754773358496 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162037280758 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296851808201 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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