Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, it is believed that museums should be enjoyable place to entertain people while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. In this essay, I completely agree that museums is better to education for some reasons.
The benefit of education place is to give information or knowledge for visitors are coming. It is because while coming in museums the visitors tend to search knowledge than for entertain. For example to get knowledge about history or relic. In other hand is plenty of places to go entertain like scenery place and cinema. So there's no need to lose impression of the museums as education place. Afterwards in this era that is a lot of people forgot the history of his past. As result nationalist souls in the society begins to wear off.
On the contrary, the disadvantage of using museums for entertain place can be destructive historical relics by those who are not responsible. It is very damaging to the country as an important asset. Then another loss is the atmosphere is not conducive to disruptive to those who truly seek knowledge. However make the atmosphere become enjoyable is important also. But with certain boundaries that can controlled. For example make a regulate for the action is not be conjured in the museum.
It is important to use museums for education place. Because education give more advantages than entertain. In my opinion government should campaign to their society for coming in museums. For living again historical values which have started lost for this era. Then the government should renovate again the facilitating for making people interest come in museums.
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...ant to use museums for education place. Because education give more advantages than ent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, then, while, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0295202952 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74230573377 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6071418984 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.15 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.55 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300655406072 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932106726878 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129486504782 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229398423293 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16119508898 0.056905535591 283% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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