Some people think that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extend do you agree or not.
Music is a way to express emotions and traditions related to specific region. According to certain individual perspective is music is best thing to creat harmony between diverse nations and people from all age groups. Although it provides an excellent opportunity of entertainment but also give some positive mental and physical impacts, and some others argue that its only has ability to expand cultures and traditions. In this essay, we are going to discuss both the side of the argument and some opinion about this factor.
Firstly, the music is a process to express oneself and socialize as well, it is considered outdoor activities and friends go to concerts to spend quality time with eachother. In this way they get break from daily hectic routine and socialize as a way to entertain and in such events new people meet and frieds circle expand. When international student went to other country they try to join different clubs to create friendly environment their and escape from lonliness.
And secondly, these activities give not only chance of physical activity but also stress buster and mood booster. By doing dancing with music can be consider as healthy effect and for some people its way to release their anxiety and depression.
On the other side, because of globalization music from all countries is available and its also show specfic cultures in it. The folk music and different gundra of music assist to lessen the cultural gaps between nations by providing universality in world. For example the English pop music which origanilly belong from Europe and now it can be observe all around the globe artists performig which making divergent group of persons who love it.
In conclusion, common interests of individuals bring them closer. And it strick people from all human races cultures and traditions, and from different ages. I strongly agree with this point of view that music have many advantages but minimizing rites difference between countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the best'.
Suggestion: is the best
...certain individual perspective is music is best thing to creat harmony between diverse ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11764705882 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62590902573 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609907120743 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1074116586 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24934758864 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802360756393 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546125743632 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138849916697 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356944663317 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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