Some people think that newly built houses should follow the style of old houses in local areas. Others think that people should have freedom to build houses of their own style. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that people should build new houses that have to follow the old-fashioned styles in their places, while others think that it is unnecessary to keep the culture. In my opinion, I believe that people have to build new houses that have to follow the special style if that place has a unique style.
In some special places, such as old ancient villages, people have to follow the culture if they come there to earn money to live themselves and their family due to some advantages of the local remarkable style. Hoi An, for example, which is located in the Central of Vietnam, has a remarkable style. Thanks to the ancient style of Hoi An culture, people being living in there can have more job opportunities that are related to tourism, such as tour guiders and selling some human basic needs. Thanks to the development of tourism, people living Hoi An have a better condition, which is an element in the development in economy of Vietnam. In conclusion, in some specific places, extraordinary style has a good deal of advantages, therefore, people have to follow the style in some special localities.
In other places like metropolises, people, thus, do not need to follow to trend or the culture to build a new house. In fact, people have been coming to metropolises to settle down and earn money to live their family although the unreasonable price and the fast pace of life. Thus, it is cultural mixed in metropolises. People, moreover, might be much more comfortable when they build a new freestyle house. In summary, it is unnecessary to build a new house that has to follow the culture in major cities.
To sum up, thanks to some massively positive results of old-fashioned style houses in some specific localities, people have to follow the style if they are going to settle down and earn money to live there. Moreover, people living in other places do not need to follow the culture, thus, they can build a new house which is comfortable with them.
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...velopment of tourism, people living Hoi An have a better condition, which is an element...
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...nd or the culture to build a new house. In fact, people have been coming to metrop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in summary, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75872093023 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62078262259 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.418604651163 0.561755894193 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5163237257 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.928571429 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374487265753 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14925370154 0.084324248473 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128914061128 0.0667982634062 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.275258509382 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147038525291 0.056905535591 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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