People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Nowadays, people living in large cities are dealing with some issues every day, which are polluting conditions and congestions. Therefore, in my opinion, governments should engage people to move to some rural areas to settle down.
There are some problems, such as air pollution, noise pollution, and congestion, that is caused because of the immigrant. Many people have been living in some metropolises due to job opportunities means a large amount of green spaces cut down and a number of vehicles used increased, which causes air pollution. Moreover, a number of cars and motorbikes increased causes noise pollution in several times a day. Thus, people might not pay their attention on work effectively because an amount of noise from vehicles. Besides, due to the urbanization in some metropolises, there are several traffic jams and congestions in some times a day.
Therefore, governments should attract some people to move and settle down in some rural areas. If governments improve some infrastructures in their countries and attract some big companies to come to some rural areas, people might go to there to live and work because the price in rural areas are much cheaper than the one in central cities. Moreover, in rural areas, people can live in an excellent atmostphere because there are a great deal of green spaces.
To sum up, I believe that individuals living in large cities are facing some serious problems which can impact people’s health. Moving to rural areas, therefore, is a better choice if governments can attract some big companies and improve the infrastructures in nations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 297, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'cheaper' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: cheaper
...rk because the price in rural areas are more cheaper than the one in central cities. Moreove...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'deals'?
Suggestion: deals
...t atmostphere because there are a great deal of green spaces. To sum up, I believe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, as to, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1348.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16475095785 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85656787693 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501915708812 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9373706324 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215507927795 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950994382559 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729290471053 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160885035048 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541082929157 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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