Some people think that the news channels and media nowadays have sensationalized and influenced people’s lives in negative ways. Others disagree and say that it is also positive.
Both news broadcasting channels and media have a significant influence on people across the world. Some experts believe that at modern time news channels and media have a major impact on the thinking and life style of human in a negative way, but others argue that. This essay will discuss the possible reasons that support the both views, and the impact they have to the society.
To begin with, both electronic and print media are publishing some sort of events and news that have some bad influence on the society. The electronic as well as printing media, nowadays, have some contents that are quite sensitive, and the young generation has a tendency to simulate those ideas that might have negative impacts on them. Besides, the news channels are showing some crime news as a series from which the evil person in the society get some idea to accomplish their evil deeds. For example, some days earlier the security branch of police was successful in their attempts to uncover a murder crime, and arrested the perpetrators. I became astonished knowing that they had grabbed the thinking from a crime serial broadcasted by a reputed channel.
On the other hand, media also have some programmes that are really appreciable. One of the famous print media in my country write regular articles on various voluntary works, which have an important role in encouraging the youth to get involved such social activities. Some news channels, furthermore, refuel them by telecasting some charitable works that are being carried out by some generous persons across the country. For instance, in the last year, a well-known news channel published the social activities of a magnanimous person of Dhaka cities, who run a number of orphanages and safe homes for old people. After seeing that news me along with some of my friends collected a fund for those helpless human being.
To conclude it can be said that, news channels and media sometimes publish news as well as events that might be sensible, and might have some impacts on the society. It is, nevertheless, the responsibility of ours how should we response to those news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, really, so, well, for example, for instance, sort of, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1768.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59456947402 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554621848739 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9915780141 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.866666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.93333333333 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337295474664 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120951280322 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889341259384 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213954792087 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744517841958 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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