In this day and age, an increasing number of contemporaries are paying attention to whether news has connection to people's lives or not. Some people claim that spending time on reading or watching news is absolutely wasteful. I find it hard to agree because news plays a crucial role in informing people about what is going on all over the world and which issues our country is facing.
On the one hand, there are some explanations for why people refuse to obtain the news. The most popular one is that the information from the news might be false, which is in other words called tabloid material. It is observed that, nowadays, a growing number of people are creating sensational news of an event,a person and a piece of information causing great public interest and excitement despite the fact that it might be fake. An a result, those who read or watch the news will be provided with a superficial perspective on the mentioned issues. Therefore, people gradually lose their trust and find it wasteful to obtain the news.
On the other hand, it is undeniable that staying up-to-date with the news helps people gain enormous benefits in comparison with tho whose do not pay attention to the new information. For example, on the COVID pandemic, the government try to warn people about corona virus through all media platforms; therefore, those who know it would prepare more carefully for the up-coming prevention phase. Moreover, people who are being connected with the news can have golden opportunity to broaden the horizons in various features of their lives. They could accumulate a range of solutions for tackling many issues which are often indicated in newspapers or programs on TV.
From these above mentioned reasons, the conclusion can be drawn that reaffirming news plays a vital role in people's lives. Despite the drawbacks, there is no waste of time in keeping updated news.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 311, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...re creating sensational news of an event,a person and a piece of information causi...
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Line 3, column 433, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'An' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: An; A
...despite the fact that it might be fake. An a result, those who read or watch the new...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, therefore, for example, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94984326019 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64962428267 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3563952088 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.785714286 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07142857143 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403416566054 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153975059307 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832704788999 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258608578248 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077123011592 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.