Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed that what people are spending time on media like newspapers or TV channels is such a waste because of no connections. Personally, I totally agree with this statement and the following essay will explain in detail.
On the one hand, newspaper and TV programs could provide the general public with helpful information and knowledges in various aspects in their life. Only by watching a programme or reading a new report would you considerably enrich your knowledges which are considered carefully. For example, through a cooking show, people could learn numerous tips to prepare delicious desserts for your own family and friends. Additionally, you would have more topics to share with your friends, which strenghthens the bonds with each other
On the other hand, another reason why media is remarkably helpful for us is entertainment. Indeed, nowadays, the number of TV shows is increasing like a recreation for citizen to relax after stressful hours of work or study. For instance, Just For Laughs Gags, a popular comedy festival, is enjoyed by many individuals for relaxation .
In conclusion, that news plays a important role in our life is undeniable.It could be significantly meaningful to people or slightly pointless to the others but there is definitely no waste of time in it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...paper and TV programs could provide the general public with helpful information and knowledges...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...s in various aspects in their life. Only by watching a programme or reading a new...
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Suggestion: .
...joyed by many individuals for relaxation . In conclusion, that news plays a impor...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ation . In conclusion, that news plays a important role in our life is undeniabl...
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...mportant role in our life is undeniable.It could be significantly meaningful to pe...
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...icantly meaningful to people or slightly pointless to the others but there is def...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 212.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15566037736 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94720530129 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669811320755 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9014425928 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.444444444 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5555555556 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166551702367 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658099853002 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692553941809 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106887855764 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700771038699 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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