Some people think the news has no connection to people's lives, so it is a waste of time to read the news in the newspaper and watch television news programmes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is claimed that it is wasteful to read news in newspaper and watch television news programmes because it seems to be irrelevant to people’s live. Although this suggestion seems reasonable, I totally disagree with this view.
The protector can state that media just report about the world situation and the politic problems which is completely unrelated with the life of normal people. For example, a blue-collar worker just need focus on bringing home the bacon so the time spent for press seems meaningless. However, I consider it as an absurd point because people have not perceived the relationship of news and their impacts on people regardless of their jobs or ages.
Some compelling reasons can be took in account for people to believe the news they watch or read everyday will have huge effects on their life. First, by staying up-to-date with the news, people can know exactly the world surrounding them, which helps them behave more appropriately. For example, if people do not update the government's policies about the war against Covid-19 constantly, they may not know about the social distance law and go out like normal days, which will leads to many consequences. Another reason is people who are being connected with the news can have a great opportunity to broaden their mind, which will support them a lot not only in normal life but also in job. In fact, people will respect and want to communicate with someone who is have a certain knowledge about many aspects that can be gained through newspaper and TV programs.
In conclusion, I want to reaffirm that although some news in newspaper and informations of TV programs seems trivial for some people, the benefits of this will be significant for everybody
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... to believe the news they watch or read everyday will have huge effects on their life. F...
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Line 5, column 765, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...want to communicate with someone who is have a certain knowledge about many aspects ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98281786942 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66049077596 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563573883162 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.7084151019 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295314865618 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124947418069 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126982126973 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195425716515 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939473021012 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.