Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people' lives in a negative ways. Others disagree and say that it is also positive. Discuss both views in give your opinion.
It remains a controversy that whether news media is advantageous for people's lives or not. In my point of view, I admit that media sometimes might have drawbacks, but I strongly argue that it would be more beneficial for human beings to access to media.
Apparently, It is news media that enable residents to reach information instantly. Thanks to the media, people nowadays could update news all around the world even just stay at home. Furthermore, the media also shapes our opinions. It is the link between the government and individuals. Our conceptions of elected officials spring from image and newspaper stories. Practically, most of us will never meet presidents or prime ministers, but those who exposed to media regularly must know about them, and they decide their votes based on the coverage of media. Lastly, an indispensable benefit of media is they might bring justice to the common man who has no power and money to fight against unjust. For example, who has not heard of Jessica's murder case, without media, Jessica's parents would have never got fairness.
As every rose is accompanied by thorns, the media too has its downside. The media could invade the privacy of famous people. Sometimes violence and vulgarity are shown and it might shape an individual's opinions, especially children and adolescents. In my opinion, I believe that people can choose what they want to see and technology have the tools enable them to block information they do not want to see. Finally, God has given us brains to judge what is right or wrong, the media just doing its job by providing us the latest information.
To sum up, I would like to reiterate by saying that the influence of media on our lives is largely positive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, finally, furthermore, lastly, so, for example, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88775510204 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64786033047 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4875263634 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207901101248 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651949621383 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550237927801 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132624396566 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315213851977 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.