Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people’s lives in negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Much attention has been drawn to the wide-spread effect of journalism on the way people live nowadays. On one hand, i am inclined to believe that false news can be emotional and physical detrimental to the other parties, especially local people. On the other hand, hardly can we deny the extent to which news media has revolutionized the modern life.
To assess the potential drawback, we must bring the question of information authenticity into focus. Assuming an individual came across a piece of information which had been posted on social media, for example, and had not been verified, there would be a possibility that person misunderstood, and controversy arose. Not only do reporters delivered news hastily without waiting confirmation of the source, but some columnists deliberately distort the news to attract more readers. As a result, a single individual or organizations might be affected or even be bankrupted. Another the reason why many citizens do not put their faith in newspaper is that they are well considered about the importance of it.
Although so far, one can readily draw the conclusion that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, we must put positive features into perspective before judging whether media is truly reliable. Being notified about military, agriculture, medical as well as disaster matters such as Covid 19 or Category 5 storm, people are able to manage to make preventative measures. Knowing the Crime rate is soaring in particular areas, for instance, people will be at the lower risk of Theft and Burglary. On top of that, national news absolutely make citizens very secured and put all their focus on works.
Taking both pros and cons into consideration, they point me to the conclusion that whether we should trust the news is dependent on where we hear the news. From my personal perspective, i suppose it can be attributed as an essential aspect of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1214057508 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9510599469 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638977635783 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8991369717 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3571428571 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3571428571 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149495447883 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0475913454972 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044389893966 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870927316816 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409272606556 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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