Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get news better through other media.
Discuss both views and give your opinion?
People have different views about what is the optimal way to update news. While it is understandable why some people think that media is ideal in terms of news updating, I personally believe that newspapers’ role in communicating news is irreplaceable because of their reliability.
On the one hand, there are some reasons why many people prefer newer media outlets. To begin with, these modern media deliver news more quickly across a variety of convenient platforms. The most notable example of this is online news. The majority of people get their news from social networking sites such as Facebook, where there are tons of information updated continuously. Therefore, people do not need to subscribe to any news publisher but still be able to access information forthwith. This also means that people can save a certain amount of money when all the news from these kinds of media platforms is free to read.
However, I am of the opinion that newspapers are believed to be the most important source of news for the majority of people. Information and knowledge printed in newspapers are usually verified and edited carefully before publishing, so as to minimize the risk of faulty news that would possibly ruin the reputation of the publishers. Therefore, newsreaders can update more authentic and reliable pieces of information through newspapers. By contrast, both social networks and online versions of some newspapers are overwhelmed with fake news, which is posted quickly so as to attract readers solely for commercial purposes. As a consequence, false information spreads rapidly. Accordingly, newspapers are obviously more trustworthy sources of information.
In conclusion, while news can be accessed through a variety of media platforms, I reckon that newspapers are an incomparable way to get news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, as to, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1550.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3264604811 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02086288884 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4311228012 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360550034519 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107595940029 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0774018154769 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241610769363 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487530572524 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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