Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and the other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Envorimental problems such as air pollution, noise pollution and global warming are becoming more difficult to tackle around the world. There are some suggestions to solve these problems. For instance, most people think that to rise the cost of fuel is one of the best solutions. This may help to tackle environmental problems in some cases, but I strongly believe that expensive fuel is not the best way. Moreover, in my opinion, there are more effective ways to solve environmental issues.
Air pollution is one of the biggest issues around the world and some vehicles like cars cause to deteriorate this problem. By this I mean that most vehicles discharge some gases which are harmful for people. To tackle this problem, government should motivate people to use environmental friendly vehicles such as bicycle or electric cars. As a result, people would start to use these vehicles which do not harm environment is one of the best ways to solve environmental issues.
Having said that, for some people to increase the cost of fuel is the best solution. These people also say that some people would stop to use their own cars and start to use public transport to commute their work, as long as government increase the cost of fuel. In other words, some people may prefer to use cheap public transportation rather than cars which are expensive for them to use. This, in turn, will probably help to decrease the amount of gases which cause air pollution.
In conclusion, although some people believe that to increase the cost of fuel is more preferable way to tackle environmental issues, I think that there are better solutions of these problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 96, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'deteriorating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: deteriorating
...world and some vehicles like cars cause to deteriorate this problem. By this I mean that most ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, i mean, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94265232975 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64316930172 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469534050179 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8931164422 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9285714286 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.396747340854 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151652782998 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0899260416762 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258265952497 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374214451297 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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