Some people think parents are responsible for transporting their children to school. Others think it is government's responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
With the rise in modernisation, a man transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take the first step on the moon. One of the most controversial issue today relates to the topic that who is responsible for trasnporting their childrens to school: parents or government? In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view.
On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that parents are responsible for transporting their childrens to scool. Parents are the ultimate role models for children. Moreover, Every word, movement and action has an effect. No other person or outside force has a greater influence on a child than the parent so thats why parents plays important role in the childrens life. Furthermore, when the childrens become young, they earn money to fulfil their own as well as parents needs so it is the parents responsibility to transport their children to school. Afterthat, its childrens responsibility to take proper education from school and become a successful person in their life.
On the other hand it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that infact it is also government's responsibility to transporting the childrens to school. Apart from that, government shout have to provide free bus service facilities to the childrens so that they can easily go to school. Secondly, some parents can do private jobs, they do not have time to transport their childrens to school. Moreover, in other countries like USA, government of that country provide free education to the childrens as well as free transport service to the childers of that country.
As we can seen that, there are number of answers to this question. On balance, however, I tend to believe that it is both parents as well as government responsibilty to transport the childrens to school so that they can grasp knowledge from the schools and take part in the development of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97597597598 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89690035578 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492492492492 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.421987738 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4705882353 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342419829505 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11530064074 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872340222139 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205404327489 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589666876129 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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