Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
For the progress of any society, educating the youth is very important. While some believe that, it is the duty of parents, others argue that teachers at the school play an important role. In my opinion, parents are the biggest contributors in children’s learning, however, the importance of good teachers cannot be denied.
Firstly, Child’s education starts from the mother's cradle. Young ones follow and imitate their parent, and consider them as a role model. If a child sees bad behaviour or communication in the house he will obviously behave the same outside the house. For example, many people use abusing language in front of children which in turn make them believe that there is nothing wrong with abusing. Hence parents role is very important in the upbringing of the child.
Secondly, father is a role model for any child. The job, habits’ and way of living has a strong impact on children. If the father is careless in his job, he cannot expect his child to be the best. Similarly, if the parents are smoking in the house, they would not be able to stop their children once the find out if they are smoking. For instance, a famous actor Ranbhir kapoor admitted in front of the press that his habit of smoking and drugs is because he saw his father doing the same. This proves the importance of parents in children’s moral upbringing.
On the contrary, schools are the place to polish the children and to help the face the actual problems in life. But is the basic education at home is wrong then no school education can be of any benefit.
In conclusion, the basic and the long lasting education starts from home. It is agreed that parents should teach good morals to children. In future, different parenting courses are needed to be introduced to overcome such challenges.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82958199357 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64285601515 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6472197363 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0526315789 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3684210526 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36842105263 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24422563252 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071509951733 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723278311775 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13594225572 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474700671045 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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