young people spend their free time in shopping malls. This has a negative effect on young people and society. To what extent do you agree?
In the last decade, there has been an increased trend in shopping malls. Some young people spend their leisure time in such places. It is generally believed that such activities have a negative influence on society and individuals. In my opinion, I disagree to this. Analysing the facts that such malls offer great entertainment places, educational stalls and latest technology displays will help to prove my point.
Firstly, malls provide great sources of entertainment. Cinemas are such examples. Almost all big malls now provide state of the art and 3D movies theatres where young people can come and enjoy in free time. Moreover, the food courts at such places offer the cheap and affordable food.
Secondly, the malls have sponsors stalls from big brands where they showcase the latest electronic gadgets. Such activities are of a great interest among youth. For instance, during the launch of the latest smartphone by Samsung, a serious interest by young people was seen at shopping malls in Dublin, Ireland. Moreover, educational seminars are being held regularly at such places. Thus making it a perfect place for young people to update themselves with the latest courses and learning programmes.
Lastly, malls are a source of public awareness. Road safety authorities hold regular events to bring awareness among young people in regards to driving and safety of other road users. Thus making it a perfect spot to meet right audience bringing an overall positive change.
On the contrary, many people argue that such places are not for amusement rather the young people should be more indulged in outdoor activities. Although true to some extent but the benefits of malls is much higher than drawbacks.
In conclusion, malls give the perfect opportunity to young people for entertainment and learning purposes. In my opinion, such activities bring a positive change in society. In future, governments should take steps to improve and provide more financing for such malls and educational stalls.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ies bring a positive change in society. In future, governments should take steps t...
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Line 6, column 174, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'In the future'?
Suggestion: In the future
...ies bring a positive change in society. In future, governments should take steps to impro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24223602484 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63141540896 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568322981366 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5847820957 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7272727273 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234750562036 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657886136076 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845207827565 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125454001456 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400553300778 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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