"Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
With time, diseases are getting complex and hard to cure. In such circumstances, authorities are looking for more options and finding the ways to prevent the diseases with research and health education. In my opinion, it is the best approach as it saves a lot of money which would otherwise be used during treatment, will decreases mortality and morbidity rates and yet create awareness among people.
Firstly, with the extensive basic knowledge of the disease physiology, scientist are able to halt the speed and in some cases can provide complete prevention from some diseases. This activity comes at a high price and time which is sponsored by governments. But looking at the brighter side, these inventions saves billions of dollars which would otherwise be utilised during hospital care. For instance, the global programme for polio eradication cost a fortune to global health authorities but with the efforts, we have achieved 99% eradication rate. Such strategy helps in overall health expenditure.
Secondly, there has been a massive decrease in overall mortality and morbidity throughout the world owing to better medical research and inventions of vaccines against deadly diseases. HIV and AIDS are such examples which were thought to be incurable, but with modern research and financial help, scientist are now able to stop the further progression. Thus proving the overall beneficial effects of research.
Lastly, the awareness among the masses in regards to diseases is the most important aspect of any particular society. Many conditions are prevalent in society just because of misinformation or no information at all. Special education programmes in such cases help to understand the diseases and possible ways to prevent them at an individual level. For instance, sexual education programmes are being conducted regularly in schools. This gives an insight to the student about possible ways to get STI's and creating awareness regarding healthy sexual life. Similarly, HIV awareness has been a massive hit and proved to reduce the disease prevalence.
In conclusion, spending on prevention and education gives us economic benefits and overall less number of sick people. In my opinion, governments should encourage preventive research and spend most on it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 323, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'decrease'
Suggestion: decrease
...therwise be used during treatment, will decreases mortality and morbidity rates and yet c...
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Line 4, column 40, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
... Lastly, the awareness among the masses in regards to diseases is the most important aspect o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, similarly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41408450704 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83666867099 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580281690141 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8602035053 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.157894737 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6842105263 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.68421052632 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144569381044 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437865723006 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352089169236 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860277748317 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390458247497 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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