Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer.
What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?
In today’s world university education is a prerequisite for high paid skillful jobs. While some people believe that purpose of universities is to teach certain skills that are vital for a particular job, others support the idea to use universities as a platform to gain knowledge for one’s own sake. In my opinion main function of university education is to polish an individual’s knowledge with the futuristic resources and then use it to attain certain levels of skills required for jobs.
Firstly, university is a place to get higher education based on one’s existing knowledge. Provided with higher resources and chances of research work, it helps a person to attain certain levels of education that are helpful in future. For example, medical universities provide excellent research opportunities and expect students to make use of existing knowledge to design better techniques for the future. These techniques will in turn be used by a professional in his work place.
Secondly, the university education is a series of complex programmes developed to achieve certain levels of skills required for jobs. It is highly unlikely to have a university student just for sake of his own knowledge who does not have any previous experience. For instance an engineering student cannot have his higher education in arts just because of his own liking. This will create an imbalance and will result in waste of precious resource which otherwise can be used for better purposes.
In conclusion, main purpose if university education is to provide bright students with excellence in their basic subjects, certain opportunities to polish the skills for a better job experience. I agree to the mentioned purpose.
In future, governments should work on providing more universities to provide better chances to deserving students and help to make world a better place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31879194631 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03378904203 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496644295302 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7367047151 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.214285714 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269820553153 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100095079233 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702636548404 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157248447439 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595335112685 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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